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The Fallen: Chapter 3

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STEP TWO 


I woke up the next day and realized what happen yesterday and was so excited to get school over with. I got out of bed and took a shower when I was done I went to my closet and was standing there for felt like two hours trying to pick what clothes I wanted to wear today. My mom screamed at me from her room saying "Are you done yet I'm going to make breakfast."  I replied saying "
Yea, just let me do my hair." She said "OK." When we were done talking I started to do my hair and when I was done, I ran to the dinner table to find some eggs I ate it quickly knowing if I didn't I would miss the bus. I grabbed my backpack and went outside to find my BFF's. They were my best friend since junior high. There was a 1 girl and 2 boys who is waiting at the bus stop and ran over there but very quietly like a ninja and when I got behind them I said "WAZ UP GUYZ!!!" They all jumped and I'm pretty sure I made one of them pee their pants, LOL. They all started to yell at me to never do it again but they all knew that was not going to happen. One of the girls (Silvia) said...

Silvia: Soooo Dominik did you do your math homework 
Me: Yea, did you 
Silvia: No... can i copy off of you...PPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
Me: Fine...*gets out math homework* Here Silvia

Silvia: Thx Domi


When the other 2 guys(Drake and Kyle) heard us (also my bestfriends) They started to ask me the same thing, one them (Drake) asked

Drake: Domi can i copy your homework too  *mimicking Silvia*
Me: Of course Draki *mimicking Silvia*
Silvia: Guys stop mimicking me
Kyle: But Silvia... Draki and Domi are having fun and now I am too 

Everyone laughed except Silvia. She was just giving us a death stare until she said

Silvia: IF YOU GUYS DONT SHUT UP I WILL CUT YOUR BALLS AND SHOVE IT DOWN YOUR THROATS, GOT IT!!!!!!!!!!!
Kyle,Drake, & I: ........................................... sorry Silvia

A couple of minutes later we saw the bus and when it stopped we all climbed in and sat down and went to school. 

*time skip*

When school was over we all went to the same bus we got on to and when we where all at our stop (same stop) We said our goodbyes and went home



When I walked into the house I saw my mother and she asked me if I had any homework or test and I said "no" of course so I could go online. I clicked on the same link I was on yesterday with the instruction it said Welcome back we told you we would know. Step two is a little bit boring but will be very useful later on. Step two is about how to change your clothes within a second *literally* This is how you do it.
- Go to the mall, store, online store, etc. or you can even use you mind
- If you are going to use your mind think of what you want to wear even if it doesn't exist Just say "IWTWT" out loud. If your not using your mind go to a shop where they sell clothes, if you for example , found a T-shirt you want to wear y must say "IWTWT" which means I Want To Wear This. 
-It works on any thing that is clothes and/or assorry such as: bracelets, earrings, piercing, nail polish,makeup, etc.
 

Like we said before IT WILL come useful later on once you have made THE decision which will be on step 3, same rule as before you must wait 24 hours to get back on. 

They keep on saying WE its so creepy, and they said that I will make a decision, what decision. Am I going to die. I feel nervous, creeped out, and excited at the same time, I can't wait for tomorrow.




A/N:
Hey guys here is another update 

ummmmmm so how ur day ... good... thats good 
Since i didn't put a song or a part of lyric on here the song of the day is
DROWN by BRING ME THE HORIZON

will im ganna go sooooo bye 

Again This is my first story sooooo don't judge. But give me some hints of what needs to be changed.

WAIT if you know Dominik+Silvia thing (movie) then you are awesome don't know what I'm talking about well you just need to watch the movie. What is the movie call you are probably asking well I can't tell you cause it will probably scar you anyways... if you know what movie I'm talking about, you can leave it on the chat (thing)below soooo yea BYE  

also if you have any request for a story or picture then plz comment down below and i'll probably do it because i don't have a life lol 

goodbye my MAJESTIC PEOPLE 

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You could add a few touches of scenery, Like small details: weather, trees, amount of noise in the area, also a bit any fragrances. it helps build the atmosphere. Also it would be okay to make a few actions and thoughts more subtle and straightforward. For example:

I glanced out the window while I munched on my bread. The sky was clear, and the sun glowed brightly.
'Its a beautiful day,' I thought. I stuffed the remaining bread into my mouth and headed for the door.
"Mom, I'm off to school now!" I don't think she heard my muffled mouth.
I stepped outside and took a deep breath. The air was cool and smelled fresh, and the streets were peaceful and silent.
All except for the school bus driving away from the bus stop.
'Oh, crap, I'm gonna be late,'

Well... yeah... I'm a critic. That's what I am. But other than that the story is awesome.